Acting
Shakespeare
(TH 344 and TH 340)
Fall 2008
TH 344 – Acting
Playing Shakespeare

Instructor: Bruce Cromer                                Classroom: Herbst Theatre, CA
Office: T148K CA                                               Class Time: MWF 1-2:50
Office Hours: MWTHF 12-1                         
Phone: 775-2430
E-Mail:
bruce.cromer@wright.edu

Course Objective: To further young actors’ comprehension and use of Shakespeare’s
language, through the study of a major role.  Emphasis will be on text analysis (breaking the
script into beats; choosing objectives, obstacles, and tactics), including scansion and key-
wording.  PLAYING SHAKESPEARE, the book and the tape series, will also enhance the scene
work.  You will work on three scenes or monologues from a major Shakespearean role; your
entire package of scenes and/or monologues should 10 to 15 minutes in length.            

Tentative Course Outline:
Week One: Sonnets and Role Choice
Week Two: First Scene Rehearsed
Week Three:  First Scene Shown
Week Four:  Second Scene Rehearsed
Week Five:  Second Scene Shown
Week Six: Third Scene Rehearsed
Week Seven: Third Scene Shown
Week Eight: All Scenes Rehearsed
Week Nine: All Scenes Shown
Week Ten: TBA

Grading Criteria:
Professional Skills: You are expected to attend every class prepared, punctual, polite, and
with a positive attitude.  There are no excused absences for this course!  In accordance with
the PATP attendance policy, if you miss 20% of the quarter’s sessions (6 classes), you will
automatically fail the class.  Wear clothing appropriate to your chosen scenes and/or
monologues.  If you are ill, inactive, improperly dressed, or late, you will lose half of your
attendance points for that class.

Written Work: You will turn in a scene-by-scene plot synopsis for your play, a complete list of
textual clues for your characterization, and text analysis for your three scenes.  

Acting Work: The instructor will subjectively grade your scene work on your character
choices and use of the language.

Required Books (ordered in campus bookstore):
PLAYING SHAKESPEARE, by John Barton.
A footnoted edition of your chosen character’s play.

Recommended Books (*ordered in campus bookstore):
ACTING IN SHAKESPEARE, by Robert Cohen.
THE FRIENDLY SHAKESPEARE, by Norrie Epstein.
*APPLAUSE FIRST FOLIO IN MODERN TYPE.
COMPLETE WORKS, by Shakespeare (Contemporary Pub. Co.).
*RIVERSIDE SHAKESPEARE, published by Houghton Mifflin.
*SHAKESPEARE’S WORDS, by David and Ben Crystal.
SHAKESPEARE’S METRIC ART, by George T. Wright.
*SHAKESPEARE ALIVE!, BY Joseph Papp and Elizabeth Kirkland.
CHRONICLE OF WESTERN FASHION, by John Peacock.
*HIGH FASHION IN SHAKESPEARE’S TIME, by Andrew Brownfoot.
SHAKESPEARE ALOUD, by E.S. Brubaker.

GRADE POINTS

Professional Skills (40 possible points)
Attendance (30 possible points; 1 pt. for each class punctually attended; .5 pt. for each time
you’re late, improperly dressed, or inactive; there are no excused absences for this class ---
missing 6 classes, for what ever reasons, will result in an F for the course!)

Attitude (10 possible points; up to 5 possible for each area):
Positive (open-minded, ready to receive criticism, supportive of classmates)
Prepared (assignments completed, properly dressed, healthy and ready to work)

Written Work (20 possible points)
Sonnet (3 pts.), Play Synopsis (4 pts.), First Scene Textwork (3 pts.), Second Scene Textwork
(3 pts.), Third Scene Textwork (3 pts.), Character Clues Paper (4 pts.)

Acting Work (40 possible points)
(10 points for each of your four showings of your scenes and/or monologues)


Total Points for Course and Letter Grade
(90-100 pts. = A, 80-89 pts. = B, 70-79 pts. = C, 60-69 pts. = D, 59 pts. or less = F)
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TH 340 - Movement for the Actor
Moving Shakespeare

Instructor: Bruce Cromer                       Classroom: T212, CA
Office: T148K CA                                      Class Time: TTH 10-11:50
Office Hours: MWTH 12-1       
Phone: 775-2430
E-Mail:
bruce.cromer@wright.edu

Course Objectives:
*To introduce students to the wide range of characters (and necessary physical
transformations) in Shakespeare’s plays.
*To give students practical experience in brief scenes and monologues using period movement,
Laban, Cohen tactics, and body language.
*To give students practical experience using text analysis, improvisation, stage combat, and
other skills previously taught in the Professional Actor Training Program.

Tentative Course Outline:
Week One: Clowns and Rustics
Week Two: Clowns and Rustics
Week Three: Nobility and Fools
Week Four: Nobility and Fools
Week Five: Mad Folk and Supernatural
Week Six: Mad Folk and Supernatural
Week Seven: Warriors and Breeches Parts
Week Eight: Warriors and Breeches Parts
Week Nine: Lovers
Week Ten: Lovers

Grading Criteria:
Professional Skills: You are expected to attend every class prepared, punctual, polite, and with
a positive attitude.  There are no excused absences for this course!  In accordance with the
PATP attendance policy, if you miss 20% of the quarter’s sessions (4 classes), you will
automatically fail the class.  Wear mock-up period rehearsal clothes...  For women that means
long skirts, corsets, with rolled-up towels for bum-rolls.  For men: sweat pants and tight vests.  
Both sexes should have "puffy" shirts and hard-soled shoes, and tights.  If you are ill, inactive,
improperly dressed, or late, you will lose half of your attendance points for that class.

Written Work: You will fill in character sheets given for each character study you do.  These will
be collected at the end of the two weeks work on each scene.  You will be asked to break the
scene into character beats, with objectives, tactics, and obstacles noted in the margins.  You will
draw (or include an image you find of) the character’s costume.  You will also give written
feedback to your fellow students’ work.  

Acting Work: The instructor will subjectively grade your acting work, in terms of your
demonstrated use of period movement, Laban, Cohen tactics, body language, and speech.

Required Books (ordered for campus bookstore):
SHAKESPEARE ALIVE, by Joe Papp and Elizabeth Kirtland.
HIGH FASHION IN SHAKESPEARE’S TIME, by Andrew Brownfoot.
An edition of Shakespeare’s complete works.

Recommended Books (ordered for campus bookstore):
SHAKESPEARE ALOUD, by E.S. Brubaker.
SHAKESPEARE A TO Z, by Charles Boyce.
THE FRIENDLY SHAKESPEARE, by Norrie Epstein.
SHAKESPEARE’S METRIC ART, by George T. Wright.
SHAKESPEARE’S COMPLETE WORKS: two versions have been ordered.
APPLAUSE FIRST FOLIO IN MODERN TYPE, edited by Neil Freeman.
CHRONICLE OF WESTERN FASHION, by John Peacock.





GRADE POINTS

Professional Skills (30 possible points)
Attendance (20 possible points; 1 pt. for each class punctually attended; .5 pt. for each time you’
re late, improperly dressed, or inactive; there are no excused absences for this class --- missing
4 classes, for what ever reasons, will result in an F for the course!)

Attitude (10 possible points; up to 5 possible for each area):
Positive (open-minded, ready to receive criticism, supportive of ensemble)
Prepared (assignments completed, properly dressed, healthy and ready to work)
 

Written Work (20 possible points)
(4 pts. for each completed character sheet):
Clowns and Rustics
Nobility and Fools
Mad Folk and Supernatural                    
Warriors and Breeches Parts
Lovers

Final Test on HIGH FASHION IN SHAKESPEARE'S TIME (worth 5 points)

Character Work (45 possible points)
(Subjectively graded by the instructor; up to 9 pts. for each Character Study):
Clowns and Rustics
Nobility and Fools
Mad Folk and Supernatural
Warriors and Breeches Parts
Lovers


Total Points for Course and Letter Grade
(90-100 pts. = A, 80-89 pts. = B, 70-79 pts. = C, 60-69 pts. = D, 59 pts. or less = F)
John Barton
circa 2005
Character Studies for
TH 344 2008

Romeo and Juliet
Juliet (Jasmine)

Macbeth
Macbeth (Zach) and Lady Macbeth (Elyse)

Hamlet
Hamlet (Stephen) and Ophelia (Graci)

Othello
Iago (Shea) and Othello (Alex)

Shakespeare Challenge
Katherina, Lady Macbeth, Miranda (Molly)
Imogen, Helena, Desdemona (Amy)
Romeo, Proteus, Macbeth (Troy)
Juliet, Miranda, Viola (Megan)
Puck, Helena, Goneril (Nevada)
Benedick, Macbeth, Richard III (Matt)
Paulina, Lady Macbeth, Adriana (Valerie)


Type-Casting
Valerie, Elyse - character: character lover or waiting woman or leading woman
Nevada, Molly, Graci, Amy - young leading lady: romantic lead or tragic lead or character lover
Jasmine, Megan, Amy - ingenue/character: young romantic lead or lover or young tragic lead
Shea, Matt, Stephen - ingenue: young romantic lead or young villain or young tragic lead
Zach, Alex, Troy  - character: young villain or young tragic lead or character lover or clown
Sonnet XXX ( / = strong stress, x = weak stress)
Remember, this is simply how I'd scan it; how would you say it?

 /     x        x    /       x      x       /      /     x    /        a trochee, an iamb, a pyrrhic, a spondee, and an iamb
When to  | the ses|sions of | sweet si|lent
thought

x    /      x     /      x   /          x      x        /        /             three iambs, a pyrrhic, then a spondee       
I sum|mon up | remem|brance of | things
past,

x   /        x     /       x     /    x  x   /       x    /                   three iambs, an anapest, then an iamb
I sigh | the lack | of man|y a thing | I
sought,

x     /           /      /           /      /       x      /        /          /       an iamb, two spondees, an iamb, then a spondee
And with | old woes | new wail | my dear | time's
waste:

/      x      x     /         x   /         x    /        x    /          a trochee, followed by four iambs
Then can | I drown | an eye, | unused | to
flow,

x     /       x         /           /   x         /          /      x       /         two iambs, a trochee, a spondee, then an iamb
For pre|cious friends | hid in | death's date|less
night,

x      /        x   /          /         /          x      /        x      /        two iambs, a spondee, then two iambs
And weep | afresh | love's long | since can|cell'd
woe,

x      /            x       /         x     /    x  x  /      x       /              three iambs, an anapest, then an iamb
And moan | th'expense | of man|y a van|ish'd
sight:

/       x       x     /        x    /      x   x        x     /             a trochee, two iambs, a spondee, then an iamb
Then can | I grieve | at grie|vances | fore
gone,

x      /    x x      x     /        x    /        /     /                 an iamb, a pyrrhic, two iambs, then a spondee
And hea|vily | from woe | to woe | tell
o'er

x      /       x     /        x   /        x   /      x       /            the first truly iambic pentameter line!!!
The sad | account | of fore|-bemoa|ned
moan,

  x    /       /     /       x  x      /      /       x   /              an iamb, a spondee, a pyrrhic, a spondee, then an iamb
Which I | new pay | as if | not paid | be
fore.

x   /     x     /        x   /        x     /          /       /         four iambs, then a spondee
But if | the while | I think | on thee, | dear
friend,

/    /     x     x      x    /          x      /      x       /           a spondee, a pyrrhic, then three iambs
All los|ses are | restored | and sor|rows
end.
I know your face; it haunts my thoughts.  I cry.
I hear your voice; it splits my ears.  I cry.
I am familiar with your rhetoric;
It sticks in mind to make my insides sick.
Your presence growing makes my body weak
And more support for you makes things look bleak.
With those effects, I can’t stay silent, sad.
I’ll tell you of the struggles I have had.
I’m nurses, welders, artists all in hell.
Because of things that happened, we all fell,
And since you’re white and wealthy, all is good.
But watch and listen ‘til it’s understood:
No man to represent those he knows not,
Obama/Biden will come out on top.
                   
     Molly

Dear heart; Can words describe my love for thee?
La Vie en Rose, l’amour, it plays, delights,
Between these verbs and nouns and thoughts indeed;
This song, our song, so soft behind your eyes.
Have faith, when rain and cloud corrupt my mirth;
Despite requests to fall deep into sleep,
Your face appears to lay and seal the Earth
That open’d up its mouth to swallow me.
Your voice, it scares away what frightens all;
Your lyrics find a way to ease my heart.
Through song you’ve caused this balanced one to fall,
I pray that we, my love, will never part.
Petit ami, what’s mine is yours to hold,
I give you all of me; heart, mind, and soul.
                        
Jasmine

There are some wonton boys whose frilly art
Of building words and making love a rhyme,
Can pull and push and play a lady’s heart
And make you swoon and sway for short a time.
There will be not a po’m of love for you,
That lonesome thought may cause you some dis-ease,
For sonnets all of love I just don’t do
In dealing with this terrible disease.
Do not confuse my words for feelings dear,
I like my love to do instead of speak,
For actions speak louder than words you hear,
Some actions that may make your knees go weak
Of all the words I hear, I do like two,
On weakened knee I’d like to hear “I do.”
                        
Zach

The Time I know is nothing but a Crook.
A cunning Con cavorting with the truth.
While taking clocks are Ticking all I took,
A trade is made for Prime and finite youth.
When running out; and running wild with aim,
And all for then, and nothing left for now;
New mysteries grow Old without a name,
But memories are faded; Where and How?
Why should we live egregiously today
And fear a nearing end to what we know?
Tomorrow’s just a reason why we stay;
Forgetting and preparing where to go.
To Stay with Fair quixotic afternoons,
To hold a hand and Spark and novel eye;
Where evening come and gone are far too soon,
Where Breath is held for Love and not a tie.
I’ll tare the threads andd Cut the ‘not to be’;
For if it holds, this life is not for me.
                       
 Graci

When I was young, my mother said to me
To take my time in trying to stay dry.
That I should wait ‘til I’m alone to pee,
And so, this way, my mother would not cry.
But as I tried, frustrated I became;
I could not go when nature called and so,
It all built up ‘til I forgot my name.
I cried “Mom please!” but all she said was “No.”
I ran away from home and dropped my pants
And just went wild, ignoring my Mom’s begs.
She grabbed me by the hair to stop my dance,
So that’s when I just peed all on her legs.
And so, my Mom, I want to say just this:
Let me go when I want, ‘cause I don’t miss.
                        
Shea

With phoenix flames you burnt my heart with no
Regard for how my ashes fell from grace.
For once, I found my features' joyous glow
Enticing --- Much like that of your warm face.

Incurable my passions seemed before
I kissed your wrists and pulse of lips increased
Sweet pulse of skin. Revived, inspir'd so deep my core
Renewed the faith my heart had thought deceased.

The silver strands of moonlight laced throughout
Your velvet crown give twilight new eyes. Then
I view dear heavens gate strung pearled about
You smile. with breath I knocked, unmoved to bend.

O toil I 'gainst unmentioned passioned love
And break apart past habit's fragile glove.
                        
Elyse

O my!  How time does ply me to her will,
And jeer at I: in darkness at Her hand;
Now blind, in trust, to stumble forward still—
Her power weaken’d by Death’s staunch demand.
That new associate come for His due,
The dance prolong’d: I prance and pray in haste
For one last drink of daylights dear sweet fruit;
My lips, made prime, await your dulcet taste.
So satisfied: His strength is galviniz’d,
Fly fast—forgot of Life’s rever’d embrace;
Torn hither, heir to gifts in life most priz’d.
Bright bold release!  Encompass’d in gold grace!
Being of air and earth, from flesh and bone:
I tend that of my heart ‘til you come home.
                        
Amy

Now mark my thoughts oft dwell on thee, fair friend.
Who, like a drifting vessel, doth sail forth:
But I do beg of thee, swift bark, to bend
Thy sails in my direction, thy true north.
And I, a galleon sailing o’er the sea,
Retreats unto the mist, a veil, a shroud,
In fear of no fond hail I’ll hear from thee.
No smile, no sun, a gale brews in the cloud.
But look not how my timbers, they do creak,
Nor how the wind pulls free my tattered sails,
My heart, my hull is full; I’m not so weak,
This maiden voyage sails forth sharp, not frail.
Let not us be two ships that pass by night,
But keep me close to bask in thy good light.
                        
Valerie

If I have ever offended thy Soul,
I pray you bare your patience upon me
The words I say show not my heart as whole
But show my Soul as fragments unto thee
Forgiveness is the Course I wish you take
Grant me the strength and stir me ever on.
Pray I now for the life which is at stake
And knowing that our end is soon upon.
The love for you I carry with me now.
Will now forever stay within my heart.
And as you leave it breaks upon the bow.
As my heart songs stops ne’ar again to start.
 The end comes swift for those who can not see
 The loss of you for things I could not be.
                        
Alex

Dreams
At night I find myself asleep to dream;
These wonders fill my mind of most great things.
All dreams unique, fantastic; each supreme.
For instance I can fly on new found wings
To soar so high, so far, so fast, and free
Across the land the sea and through the sky;
Oh just in dreams can I go fly with glee.
Alas, I will have to utter goodbye,
Because all dreams must come to a quick end
As soon as the alarm lets out a cry.
Especially when you have dreams ardent
Where you and a woman so very sly,
Who’s kisses taste just like very sweet sweets-
Aw, fuck!  I think I need to change my sheets...
                
Stephen

Sonnet 2
Reacting to the forces deep inside,
And getting ready for that cosmic will;
A chance to represent a soulful side,
Like purple skies a lonely sun will fill.
My screaming primal pumping porous Breast,
That whom-so-ever picking love will meet,
A drug that palpitates my heart is best,
For sins of giving love the pilot’s seat.
This blackened coat I’m wearing for the storm
Has no remorse for all the things I’ve done;
A whipping horse that’s bleeding from his sores
Is now receiving signals from the sun.
To run and go get help from healthy foes,
Is letting slip a side you’ll never know.
               
 Troy

In all the world their’s none the likes of you,
Thy beauty o’er whelms the hearts of kin,
Thy humble virtue, beautiful and true
Wrings deeply in my soul and burns with in.
The ruthless wisdom that you’ll ne’er be mine
Persuades me to seek out some higher pow’r,
I hide from thee to bear my foolish pride
To help o’ercome this diabolic ho’r.
And now I feel my heart’s in need of mend,
I lost all strength to stand up strong and tall,
I shall not find a muse to rhyme with in
For without your heart my heart’s sure to fall.
Therefore my sweet I wait for thee to show,
Until that day I pray you’ll never go.
                
Matt

Dear blessed sister please don’t let me go.
The ocean depths sorrowed you hole oh no!
Your strength and beauty will live no, not kill,
My heart still beats with you and always will.
To face the world alone will be my end,
Juno forgive me if I so offend.
I was not brave enough to keep her close.
Can you hear me sister I love the most?
Will I never see your face again dear?
The seas whisper your name to me I hear.
To love again it breaks my heart
It should have been I who did now depart.
Sweet Viola I give you my true word,
Always be free to sing like a lone bird.
                               Megan

Withering night time sights keep me awake.
There’s constant crying from soul’s deepest part.
The tissue of regret creates a lake.
I search within for solace in my art.
Drawing nigh to intuition I find
creative fix.  I shoot up on this rhyme.
This high’s enough to give me piece of mind.
I sleep now fearing the morning’s loud chime.
Malnourished day time sights exhaust my eyes.
Companions remind me of hope deferred.
Ambition grows so old it’s filled with flies.
Stugglin’ to find the type of fix preferred,
I stumble upon lasting nourishment;
creative spring that just for me was meant
                                     Nevada