Acting
Shakespeare
(TH 344 and TH 340)
Fall 2009
TH 344 – Acting
Playing Shakespeare

Instructor: Bruce Cromer                                Classroom: T151, CAC
Office: T148K CA                                               Class Time: MWF 1-2:50
Office Hours: MWTHF 12-1                         
Phone: 775-2430
E-Mail:
bruce.cromer@wright.edu

Course Objective: To further young actors’ comprehension and use of Shakespeare’s
language, through the study of a major role.  Emphasis will be on text analysis (breaking the
script into beats; choosing objectives, obstacles, and tactics), including scansion and key-
wording.  PLAYING SHAKESPEARE, the book and the tape series, will also enhance the scene
work.  You will work on three scenes or monologues from a major Shakespearean role; your
entire package of scenes and/or monologues should 10 to 15 minutes in length.            

Tentative Course Outline:
Week One: Sonnets and Role Choice
Week Two: First Scene Rehearsed
Week Three:  First Scene Shown
Week Four:  Second Scene Rehearsed
Week Five:  Second Scene Shown
Week Six: Third Scene Rehearsed
Week Seven: Third Scene Shown
Week Eight: All Scenes Rehearsed
Week Nine: All Scenes Shown
Week Ten: TBA

Grading Criteria:
Professional Skills: You are expected to attend every class prepared, punctual, polite, and
with a positive attitude.  There are no excused absences for this course!  In accordance with
the PATP attendance policy, if you miss 20% of the quarter’s sessions (6 classes), you will
automatically fail the class.  Wear clothing appropriate to your chosen scenes and/or
monologues.  If you are ill, inactive, improperly dressed, or late, you will lose half of your
attendance points for that class.

Written Work: You will turn in a scene-by-scene plot synopsis for your play, a complete list of
textual clues for your characterization, and text analysis for your three scenes.  

Acting Work: The instructor will subjectively grade your scene work on your character
choices and use of the language.

Required Books (ordered in campus bookstore):
PLAYING SHAKESPEARE, by John Barton.
A footnoted edition of your chosen character’s play.

Recommended Books (*ordered in campus bookstore):
ACTING IN SHAKESPEARE, by Robert Cohen.
THE FRIENDLY SHAKESPEARE, by Norrie Epstein.
*APPLAUSE FIRST FOLIO IN MODERN TYPE.
COMPLETE WORKS, by Shakespeare (Contemporary Pub. Co.).
*RIVERSIDE SHAKESPEARE, published by Houghton Mifflin.
*SHAKESPEARE’S WORDS, by David and Ben Crystal.
SHAKESPEARE’S METRIC ART, by George T. Wright.
*SHAKESPEARE ALIVE!, BY Joseph Papp and Elizabeth Kirkland.
CHRONICLE OF WESTERN FASHION, by John Peacock.
*HIGH FASHION IN SHAKESPEARE’S TIME, by Andrew Brownfoot.
SHAKESPEARE ALOUD, by E.S. Brubaker.

GRADE POINTS

Professional Skills (38 possible points)
Attendance (28 possible points; 1 pt. for each class punctually attended; .5 pt. for each time
you’re late, improperly dressed, or inactive; there are no excused absences for this class ---
missing 6 classes, for what ever reasons, will result in an F for the course!)

Attitude (10 possible points; up to 5 possible for each area):
Positive (open-minded, ready to receive criticism, supportive of classmates)
Prepared (assignments completed, properly dressed, healthy and ready to work)

Written Work (20 possible points)
Sonnet (3 pts.), Play Synopsis (4 pts.), First Scene Textwork (3 pts.), Second Scene Textwork
(3 pts.), Third Scene Textwork (3 pts.), Character Clues Paper (4 pts.)

Acting Work (42 possible points)
(13 points for each of the four showings of your scenes and/or monologues)


Total Points for Course and Letter Grade
(90-100 pts. = A, 80-89 pts. = B, 70-79 pts. = C, 60-69 pts. = D, 59 pts. or less = F)
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TH 340 - Movement for the Actor
Moving Shakespeare

Instructor: Bruce Cromer                       Classroom: Herbst Theatre, CAC
Office: T148K CA                                      Class Time: TTH 1-2:50
Office Hours: MWTHF 12-1       
Phone: 775-2430
E-Mail:
bruce.cromer@wright.edu

Course Objectives:
*To introduce students to the wide range of characters (and necessary physical
transformations) in Shakespeare’s plays.
*To give students practical experience in brief scenes and monologues using period movement,
Laban, Cohen tactics, and body language.
*To give students practical experience using text analysis, improvisation, stage combat, and
other skills previously taught in the Professional Actor Training Program.

Tentative Course Outline:
Week One: Clowns and Rustics
Week Two: Clowns and Rustics
Week Three: Nobility and Fools
Week Four: Nobility and Fools
Week Five: Mad Folk and Supernatural
Week Six: Mad Folk and Supernatural
Week Seven: Warriors and Breeches Parts
Week Eight: Warriors and Breeches Parts
Week Nine: Lovers
Week Ten: Lovers

Grading Criteria:
Professional Skills: You are expected to attend every class prepared, punctual, polite, and with
a positive attitude.  There are no excused absences for this course!  In accordance with the
PATP attendance policy, if you miss 20% of the quarter’s sessions (4 classes), you will
automatically fail the class.  Wear mock-up period rehearsal clothes...  For women that means
long skirts, corsets, with rolled-up towels for bum-rolls.  For men: sweat pants and tight vests.  
Both sexes should have "puffy" shirts and hard-soled shoes, and tights.  If you are ill, inactive,
improperly dressed, or late, you will lose half of your attendance points for that class.

Written Work: You will fill in character sheets given for each character study you do.  These will
be collected at the end of the two weeks work on each scene.  You will be asked to break the
scene into character beats, with objectives, tactics, and obstacles noted in the margins.  You will
draw (or include an image you find of) the character’s costume.  You will also give written
feedback to your fellow students’ work.  

Acting Work: The instructor will subjectively grade your acting work, in terms of your
demonstrated use of period movement, Laban, Cohen tactics, body language, and speech.

Required Books (ordered for campus bookstore):
SHAKESPEARE ALIVE, by Joe Papp and Elizabeth Kirtland.
HIGH FASHION IN SHAKESPEARE’S TIME, by Andrew Brownfoot.
An edition of Shakespeare’s complete works.

Recommended Books (some ordered for campus bookstore):
SHAKESPEARE ALOUD, by E.S. Brubaker.
SHAKESPEARE A TO Z, by Charles Boyce.
THE FRIENDLY SHAKESPEARE, by Norrie Epstein.
SHAKESPEARE’S METRIC ART, by George T. Wright.
SHAKESPEARE’S COMPLETE WORKS: two versions have been ordered.
APPLAUSE FIRST FOLIO IN MODERN TYPE, edited by Neil Freeman.
CHRONICLE OF WESTERN FASHION, by John Peacock.





GRADE POINTS

Professional Skills (30 possible points)
Attendance (20 possible points; 1 pt. for each class punctually attended; .5 pt. for each time you’
re late, improperly dressed, or inactive; there are no excused absences for this class --- missing
4 classes, for what ever reasons, will result in an F for the course!)

Attitude (10 possible points; up to 5 possible for each area):
Positive (open-minded, ready to receive criticism, supportive of ensemble)
Prepared (assignments completed, properly dressed, healthy and ready to work)


Written Work (20 possible points)
(4 pts. for each completed character sheet):
Clowns and Rustics
Nobility and Fools
Mad Folk and Supernatural                    
Warriors and Breeches Parts
Lovers

Final Test on HIGH FASHION IN SHAKESPEARE'S TIME (worth 5 points)

Character Work (45 possible points)
(Subjectively graded by the instructor; up to 9 pts. for each Character Study):
Clowns and Rustics
Nobility and Fools
Mad Folk and Supernatural
Warriors and Breeches Parts
Lovers


Total Points for Course and Letter Grade
(90-100 pts. = A, 80-89 pts. = B, 70-79 pts. = C, 60-69 pts. = D, 59 pts. or less = F)
John Barton
circa 2005
Character Studies for
TH 344 2009

Romeo and Juliet
Juliet (Lydia)

Prince Hal/Henry V
Hal  (Greg)

Hamlet
Ophelia (Stephanie)

Shakespeare Challenge
Katherina, Lady Macbeth (Jennifer)
Helena (Kelly)


Type-Casting
Jennifer - character: character lover or waiting woman or leading woman
Kelly - young leading lady: romantic lead or tragic lead or character lover
Lydia, Stephanie - ingenue/character: young romantic lead or lover or young tragic
lead
Greg - ingenue: young romantic lead or young villain or young tragic lead
Sonnet XXX ( / = strong stress, x = weak stress)
Remember, this is simply how I'd scan it; how would you say it?

 /     x        x    /       x      x       /        /     x    /        a trochee, an iamb, a pyrrhic, a spondee, and an iamb
When to  | the ses|sions of | sweet si|lent
thought

x    /      x     /      x   /          x      x        /        /             three iambs, a pyrrhic, then a spondee       
I sum|mon up | remem|brance of | things
past,

x   /        x     /       x     /    x  x   /       x    /                   three iambs, an anapest, then an iamb
I sigh | the lack | of man|y a thing | I
sought,

x     /           /      /           /      /       x      /        /          /       an iamb, two spondees, an iamb, then a spondee
And with | old woes | new wail | my dear | time's
waste:

/      x      x     /         x   /         x    /        x    /          a trochee, followed by four iambs
Then can | I drown | an eye, | unused | to
flow,

x     /       x         /           /   x         /          /      x       /         two iambs, a trochee, a spondee, then an iamb
For pre|cious friends | hid in | death's date|less
night,

x      /        x   /          /         /          x      /        x      /        two iambs, a spondee, then two iambs
And weep | afresh | love's long | since can|cell'd
woe,

x      /            x       /         x     /    x  x  /      x       /              three iambs, an anapest, then an iamb
And moan | th'expense | of man|y a van|ish'd
sight:

/       x       x     /        x    /      x   x        x     /             a trochee, two iambs, a spondee, then an iamb
Then can | I grieve | at grie|vances | fore
gone,

x      /    x x      x     /        x    /        /     /                 an iamb, a pyrrhic, two iambs, then a spondee
And hea|vily | from woe | to woe | tell
o'er

x      /       x     /        x   /        x   /      x       /            the first truly iambic pentameter line!!!
The sad | account | of fore|-bemoa|ned
moan,

x    /       /     /       x  x      /      /       x   /              an iamb, a spondee, a pyrrhic, a spondee, then an iamb
Which I | new pay | as if | not paid | be
fore.

x   /     x     /        x   /        x     /          /       /         four iambs, then a spondee
But if | the while | I think | on thee, | dear
friend,

/    /     x     x        x    /          x      /      x       /           a spondee, a pyrrhic, then three iambs
All los|ses are | restored | and sor|rows
end.
All's Well That Ends Well
Production Pics
Macbeth
Production Pics

Jonathan Bate (2009) -
Professor of Shakespeare and Renaissance Literature at the University of Warwick and a Governor of the Royal
Shakespeare Company

Regarding Punctuation in Shakespeare's Age:
It's a very complicated question, the punctuating of Shakespeare. What we've got to remember is that punctuation in
Shakespeare's time was left to the printer. We have one scene in Shakespeare's handwriting, the scene he contributed
to the multi-author play
Sir Thomas More and there's hardly any punctuation in that. So when Shakespeare wrote there
was hardly any punctuation. And that's true if you look at fragments from other dramatic manuscripts from the period,
there's hardly any punctuation.

So the punctuation in the early printed texts came from the printer, and the rules of punctuation were very different in
Shakespeare's time. Punctuation was...in some ways it was more rhetorical, it was more to do with the shape of the
argument than grammatical. So modernising Shakespeare's punctuation is always going to be a kind of compromise
between how punctuation worked in the original texts, how students and readers use it now, and how actors use it. And
indeed one of the exercises that directors often do with actors in working on a Shakespearean scene is they'll strip all
the punctuation out and get the actors to find the punctuation in the rehearsal room.

http://www.abc.net.au/rn/bookshow/stories/2008/2239090.htm
Romeo and Juliet
Production Pics
2009 Sonnets
(In Perfectly Iambic Pentameter)

Whatever Future's fate may have in store
for me, I fear I may not quite agree.
I may have wealth, or I might end up poor,
but one thing's sure: it won't be up to me.
I spend so much time planning out my life
without a second thought of looking back;
not thinking of the pain and strain and strife
that just might come, should I stay on this track.
And yet I dream of doing what I love
and living how I've always wished I could:
A Georgia Peach to bloom from sheltered groves
ne'er tasted water quite so pure, so good,
And so, dear fate, I pray you wish me well;
thought we both know that only time will tell.
-------- Stephanie
Romeo and Juliet
Production Pics


The leaving leaves have left me longing for
Abandoned mem'ries of those greenish years
Too soon remembered, forcing time forlorn,
Reflections of the same mask drowned with tears.
A smoke filled room shoots colors all around.
Mistake: he took, my fault, or blame the beer.
No cares, all inhibitions soaked by sound
Of foreign speakers blasting ear to ear.
Familiar scents begin to fill the air,
No holding back the images in sight
The nauseated feelings that we share
Forgetting time spent wrong's no easy fight.
  These scars heal slowly, but with time they do
  Things though impossible come true with you.
                          ------Kelly

I know a love that fills a soul with joy

I see it when you look into my eye

I never thought that I would meet a boy

Who'd fill my heart with life and make me fly

You take my hand and then I feel secure

Protect and care for me with all you are

I've never met a heart that is so pure

Your words inspire and you have rais'd the bar

We're young and having fun while taking flight

With secret smiles and stolen kisses we

Learn more about each other night by night

Oh yes, I've found the perfect man for me

For I believe our love'll outlast this rhyme

With strength to be as one for all of time

                          ------Lydia

As softly as the willow tree can speak
The thunder in the skies will boldly claim
That even though the ticking may be meek
O'r loss of time holds valleys laid with blame.

I do not write like years of time once prov'd;
The heat of summer dying in the air;
Your eyes grow weak, your speech has slowly mov'd,
I cannot hear your song amidst the tear.

But now the snow falls briskly on your hands
The chill of life begins to melt away
I run t'wards sounds that echo in the sands
Of time as heavy eyes begin to lay.

I wish that life could hurt without my say
But with you not it grows so dark each day.
                         ------Jennifer

The Whole Bloody Affair

I know not where the many hours go,
It is tonight they come afull, amassed,
The light it flickers like a fires glow,
To Die once more and let it be the last.

The smell, the stench, that will be the first sign,
I quickly go and fetch my best friend Lou,
The moans, the groans, now I start to pine,
I'll make the creepy fucks see black and blue.

The doors, the windows, all are boarded tight,
I see them now they run to have their feast,
And from the roof I have them in my sight,
But unbeknownst to them, I am a beast.

What god had started now I shall make done,
Knock Knock their here, now time to have some fun.
                            ------ A sonnet by Greg Mallios